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Ode to grief

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You Hack and wheeze
cough and gag,
undeniallable proof that you should be dead.

But they wouldn't let a man of you stature, a man of your logic go to waste.
They wouldn't let a weapon such as you fall through there fingers and dissappear just like that.
no, they had bigger plans for you.

Betrial and Murder.

But how to make you do such a thing,
a commander,
loyal soldier,
a worshiped god.
Go against his people and republic?

How about they put what's left of you in a cyborg?
one with cold hands,
that way you can't feel.

But hands aren't what you feel with...

The heart.


But that can be easily fixed,
we'll just throw it out.
toss out the pride, love, and kindness you had
and replace it.
with a heart that once lived in a body of a murderer,
not anymore.
it belongs to you...

and now,
we'll give you an order.
and see how you do.
this is bout general Grievous.... who yes, was a soldier and a hero to his people of kallee....which have flesh! can you imagin? no robotic body and just skin and bone? i can't...
but it was sad cause the sith or someone just pretty much destroyed him, put him through some brainwashing and replaced his heart with one of a murderer...

not to mention, when you look in his eyes you can clearly see hate, greif, and "i'm sorry"

anybody else get that feeling?
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TimeWatch's avatar
Whenever I see Grievous in general I want to hug him, but that's just me. His story is pretty sad, but to many, he's just a villian.